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I would tear your limbs,
But your hands and feet are tied
To my heartstrings, love.
©2008-2009 ~small-hope
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I like them, so hopefully. I have an ultimate soft spot for haikus.

- S.H.

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'I just had to kill a lot of people!'
- Patrick Bateman
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frustratingly passionate. very nice. did you add ",love" to obtain the 5th on(syllable) or was that the end of your thought? just curious, it seems complete without it.

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My Book:
Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link]
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I have a naturaly tendency to call lovers 'love' in the more romantic sense, which is where it stems from, and I did need another syllable. It flowed at the time, not forced at all. Tho' reading back it seems a little odd...

- S.H.

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'I just had to kill a lot of people!'
- Patrick Bateman
:iconvertigoart:
just my opinion ... :D i enjoy your haikus ... remember though english language haikus are very flexible and can have less than 17 ons

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Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link]

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